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HeatherConley-pyramidprinciple-unit2
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I reorganized the sentence structure the way I did so people of all cultures can understand the paragraph’s meaning and overall intent.  Originally, many of the sentences written in its original form left the reader unsure of what was the author’s intent and message was to be received by the reader.  Many of the sentences within the paragraph initially left the reader confused and constantly trying to guess the proper order of the words so it mentally made sense when read internally to one’s self, and its intent universally understood.  The original writing of the paragraph seemed to be an initial first draft, leaving many of the sentences too wordy, jumbled, and left each sentence’s structure up to the reader’s imagination for interpretation.

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